Example: Showing why it matters<\/figcaption>New accessibility tools provide practical advantages to those who need them, but they can also change the perspectives and attitudes of those who do not.<\/figure>\nWhat shouldn’t go in the conclusion?<\/h2>\n The easiest way to improve your conclusion is to eliminate these common mistakes.<\/p>\n
Don\u2019t include new evidence<\/h3>\n Any evidence or analysis that is essential to supporting your thesis statement should appear in the main body of the essay.<\/p>\n
The conclusion might include minor pieces of new information\u2014for example, a sentence or two discussing broader implications, or a quotation that nicely summarizes your central point. But it shouldn\u2019t introduce any major new sources or ideas that need further explanation to understand.<\/p>\n
Don\u2019t use \u201cconcluding phrases\u201d<\/h3>\n Avoid using obvious stock phrases to tell the reader what you\u2019re doing:<\/p>\n
\n\u201cIn conclusion\u2026\u201d<\/li>\n \u201cTo sum up\u2026\u201d<\/li>\n<\/ul>\nThese phrases aren’t forbidden, but they can make your writing sound weak. By returning to your main argument, it will quickly become clear that you are concluding the essay\u2014you shouldn\u2019t have to spell it out.<\/p>\n
Don\u2019t undermine your argument<\/h3>\n Avoid using apologetic phrases that sound uncertain or confused:<\/p>\n
\n\u201cThis is just one approach among many.\u201d<\/li>\n \u201cThere are good arguments on both sides of this issue.\u201d<\/li>\n \u201cThere is no clear answer to this problem.\u201d<\/li>\n<\/ul>\nEven if your essay has explored different points of view, your own position should be clear. There may be many possible approaches to the topic, but you want to leave the reader convinced that yours is the best one!<\/p>\n
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